Friday, April 29, 2011

Your Final!

Your final paper/presentation must follow this format:
  • Exactly 1 full page, typed
  • Single spaced
  • 1-inch margins, all four sides
  • Title: Top 5 Things I Learned In Composition 102 (or 101) by Your Name
  • 12-pt regular font
  • NO MLA Header
  • Bring two copies to class at the time of your final.

Final Presentation will be graded on the following . . .
  • Ethos = Credible author; Unique and believable voice
  • Logos = Specific details with rational organization
  • Pathos = Sincere, honest and includes some personal connection
  • DFD = Did Follow Directions!
  • Presentation = Expressive and Inviting Tone

Friday, April 22, 2011

Portfolio Notes

Your portfolio serves two purposes; first you may witness your growth as a writer and a student over a semester; and, second, you will have all of your work for this semester assembled for future reference or use. To complete this task, you need to gather all of the work that you have generated in this class and assemble it in a two-inch, three-ring, hard sided binder. You must organize your portfolio in the following order, no exceptions:

1. Title page with Table of Contents
2. All drafts of Major Writing Projects—These should include the following materials for each project:
  • a. All writing process work from your blog
  • b. Any prewriting done for the project
  • c. Rough Drafts
  • d. Graded Draft (complete with instructor’s comments)
3. Written homework assignments (reader responses, vocabulary quizzes, etc)
4. Portfolio letter

Your portfolio must have a title page that includes a Table of Contents. The “TOC” will list the contents of your portfolio.

Section One is for your Writing Projects. You’ll need to turn in your prewriting work, a rough draft, the draft you turned into the instructor that was handed back to you with comments, and a revised copy of the project if applicable. You will need to write a brief introduction to this section as well. Reflect on your choices of topic, the process of the research, and the assembly of the paper, among other things.

Section Two will include all of the written homework. You will need to write a brief introduction to this section. Reflect on the readings, your responses, and the process in general.

Section Three will be a draft of your portfolio letter, in which you reflect on your growth as a writer, student, and citizen. You will be defending your portfolio as a whole entity and puzzling together where intersections in your learning occurred. You should have some definite examples and talking points throughout your letter, consider it an argument.

Monday, April 11, 2011

Passive voice was avoided by the writers.

In grading the last batch of papers, I noticed the use of passive voice. The link below can help:

https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/539/1/

There are multiple resources on this topic, so please click on "next resource" at the bottom of the page to view all of the information.

Create Your Own (Writing) Adventure

We have followed a fairly structured writing process on the last two Major Writing Projects. While writing should always be a process, good writers personalize the process to fit their style. Good writers also understand that the writing process is almost always recursive and non-linear -- meaning that you sometimes have to go back and forth between different stages.

With this in mind, I want you to accomplish these steps over the next week (4/11-4/15):

• MORE Research
• Develop thesis statement
• Develop outline
• Draft introduction
• Draft Review of Lit

The order you accomplish this and how you proceed in accomplishing these steps is up to you. Just know that when you turn in your papers, you must turn in: a paper with research, a thesis statement, an outline of your process, an introduction and a review of lit.

NEXT WEEK:

4/18: First draft due -- In-class peer review AND annotated bibliographies due

4/20: Second draft due -- In-class peer review

4/22: FINAL paper due

Monday, April 4, 2011

Zooming in on a Topic

Think about the World Cafe conversations you had in class on education. Use your blog (at least 300 words) to summarize what you discussed. See if you notice any topics that emerge -- looking for topics that you would like to explore and write about.

After your blog summary, list 3-5 possible topics you may want to tackle.

For more information on World Cafe: http://theworldcafe.com/

Friday, April 1, 2011

Weekend Blog Assignment: Education

STEP 1: Go to this web address:
http://topics.nytimes.com/top/opinion/editorialsandoped/oped/columnists/index.html


STEP 2: Choose one of the following columns on education to explore:

• “Pay Teachers More” By NICHOLAS D. KRISTOF
• “The Modesty Manifesto” By DAVID BROOKS
• “School of Glock” By GAIL COLLINS
• “Degrees and Dollars” By PAUL KRUGMAN
• “College the Easy Way” By BOB HERBERT
• “Texas, Budget Cuts and Children” By PAUL KRUGMAN
• “China’s Winning Schools?” By NICHOLAS D. KRISTOF

STEP 3: Blog -- in at least 300 words -- a response to one of the above articles. Blogs must be posted by 9 pm on Sunday night.
 
STEP 4: Read classmates blogs and comment on at least one other blog, at least 75 words, by classtime on Monday.

Wednesday, March 30, 2011

Education: Room for Debate

Read all opinions on this page and write a collective rhetorical precis of the writing. Post your precis on your blog.

http://www.nytimes.com/roomfordebate/2011/01/26/grading-the-education-president

Wednesday, March 16, 2011

Alternative Assignment :: March 18

Your task is to participate in peer review. If you missed class and don't know your review group, you must email me to ask. (Remember, your participation impacts your "process" points on your paper.) Follow these steps:

1. Post your draft (1500 words) by Friday morning at the start of class: 9 am or 11 am.
2. Review the drafts of each of your team members. (Must be 75 or more words) Answering each of these questions:
  • Summarize what the paper is about.
  • Identify the thesis statement.
  • Point out strong words or phrases.
  • Identify one item that would improve the paper
NOTE: Your peer review must be done by 9 pm on Sunday night.

Enjoy your spring break!

Monday, March 7, 2011

Major Writing Project 2: Process & Dates

03.07
In-class: Group work -- Identify civic/public issues
Homework: Read and write a rhetorical precis on Chapter 13 of Good Reasons


03.09
In-class: Research on civic/public program
Find at least 2 sources, write rhetorical precis with citation


Homework: Blog, in paragraph form in at least 400 words, answering these questions. (This will create a draft summary of the issue.):
  • What exactly is the problem?
  • Who is most affected by the problem?
  • What causes the problem?
  • Has anyone tried to do anything about it? If so, why haven't they succeeded?
  • What is likely to happen in the future if the problem isn't solved?
Make a claim using this template (see page 210 of Good Reasons): Someone should (or should not) do something because . . .


03.11
In-class: Research on solution to problem
Find at least 3 sources, write rhetorical precis with citation


Homework: Blog, in paragraph form in at least 700 words, creating a draft summary of your proposal and your argument. Use the questions on page 223 of Good Reasons.


03.14
In class: Create outline
Homework: Write outline (on blog)


03.16
In-class: Compose first draft
Homework: Annotated Bibliography on blog


03.18
TBA


03.28
Final paper + Annotated Bibliography due at beginning of class

Wednesday, February 23, 2011

Alternative Assignment: February 25, 2011

Everything You Know

You have spent a good amount of time reading the research surrounding your topic of interest. You have blogged about your research. You have written summaries of your research and created an outline. Now, it is time to pause, step away from your research, and take stock of what you know about your topic. It is time to re-invite your own voice into the conversation. Your job is to blog (500 words) about everything you know on your topic -- in your own words, incorporating your own thoughts. This is, in some ways, a way to reflect on what you are learning. Some of what you write may end up in your final paper, but that isn't the ultimate goal.


Your blog is due on Sunday at 9 pm. You must comment on two classmates' blogs by classtime on Monday. (Your comments must be at least 75 words.)

Wednesday, February 16, 2011

Upcoming dates . . .

We have just officially entered the zone of your first Major Writing Project. Here is the plan for the next few weeks:

February 16: In-class & Homework: A total of 8 sources on your topic (at least 3 must be academic)with rhetorical precis on your blog -- DUE on 2/18

February 18: In-class: Now that you have done the research, it is time for you to make a claim. Write your claim + reasons and create a thesis statement. Get my approval before class is over. Homework: Write an introduction, using your newly created thesis statement. Put your intro on your blog.

February 21: In-class: Collaboratively create an outline. Homework: Write on your blog a summary of the arguments about your topic -- at least 500 words.

February 23:In-class: Begin compiling paper and annotated bibliography. Homework: Work on first draft

February 25:NO Class: Everything You Know Blog, alternative assignment

February 28: First draft (at least 1000 words) due in class -- on blog and in hard copy! In-class: Peer Review. Homework: Revision.

March 2: Second draft (at least 1500 words) due in class. In-Class: Instructor/Teacher conferences, if necessary

March 4: FINAL draft due.

Monday, February 14, 2011

Citing Sources

Here is my favorite online guide for citing sources:

http://honolulu.hawaii.edu/legacylib/mlahcc.html#books

Another -- even better -- resource:

http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/01/

Friday, February 11, 2011

A weekend for catching up . . .

My dear Comp102 students, you have the weekend to catch up your blogs. By Monday, at the start of class, you should have the following items done:

1) Set up blog on blogspot.com
2) Follow all of your classmates' blogs
3) Follow my blog: dawndiprince.blogspot.com
4) Have the following blog posts:
** 10-15 questions you have about your topic
** a Ted.com video (yes, it must be from Ted.com) related to your topic
** a Rhetorical Precis about your video (use the same format as you would for creating a precis for an article)
** a Rhetorical Precis about an academic article you found using Google Scholar AND the CSU-Pueblo library system

Please NOTE: Your questions, video, AND both Rhetorical Precis should be added to your blog. You do NOT need to bring a hard copy of your precis to class.

Have a great weekend! See you on Monday. If you haven't already heard President Mubarak stepped down from power in Egypt.

Monday, February 7, 2011

Blogging for Invention

As we have talked about in class, blogging can be used to incite protests, chat about football, give fashion advice or connect with other people. In ENG102, we will be using blogging for different purposes -- to invent. When I use the word invention, I do not mean to conjure up images of Thomas Edison or Bill Gates. Rather, when I see the word invention, I think instead of Aristotle. Aristotle created a step-by-step framework for rhetorical strategy. Aristotle's Five Canons of Rhetoric include: 1) invention; 2) arrangment; 3) style; 4) memory; and 5) delivery.

Invention, in my opinion, is the most important and can be the hardest part. Invention is where you begin, it is putting words on the page, and it is finding something to say. Aristotle also states that invention is "discovering the best available means of persuasion."

In ENG 102, invention will also include research. For academic papers, research is how we find what to say. We must first consult what others have said, written and argued on a topic. Only after we listen to what is currently be said and written can we insert ourselves into the academic conversation. Here is a metaphorical description of what you will be doing:

"Imagine that you enter a parlor. You come late. When you arrive, others have long preceded you, and they are engaged in a heated discussion, a discussion too heated for them to pause and tell you exactly what it is about. In fact, the discussion had already begun long before any of them got there, so that no one present is qualified to retrace for you all the steps that had gone before. You listen for a while, until you decide that you have caught the tenor of the argument; then you put in your oar. Someone answers; you answer him; another comes to your defense; another aligns himself against you, to either the embarrassment or gratification of your opponent, depending upon the quality of your ally's assistance. However, the discussion is interminable. The hour grows late, you must depart. And you do depart, with the discussion still vigorously in progress " (The Philosophy of Literary Form 110-111).

Your blog is where you will prepare to enter the conversation; it is your place of invention. There will be required assignments, but I encourage you, as scholars, to do more than the required. Your blog will be where you collect your ideas, your thoughts, your words and your research.

Good luck! I will be blogging with you.

Tuesday, February 1, 2011

Reclaiming Sophistry?

The Sophists have been much maligned – at least in my years of learning. The Sophists were portrayed as amoral, money-hungry manipulators of rhetoric. I am grateful for the more nuanced version of this story from Bizzell and Herzberg in The Rhetorical Tradition. The authors indicate that this bad reputation stems from an ancient and incomplete description of the Sophists in comparison with Plato. The Sophists and Plato disagreed on one foundational idea – the quest for truth. Plato sought (and thought attainable) absolute truth, while the Sophists did not believe in such truth. They advocated for a conditioned truth – one influenced by kairos rather than something definitive and divine. Isocrates, a Sophist, valued education and knowledge necessary for current affairs, tangible immediate needs – not just lofty transcendent pursuits. He, and other Sophists, sought to acknowledge cultural difference and tolerance. Rather than uniting around absolute common ideals, Sophists had “a common recognition that humanity could express itself in many ways and was not subject to an absolute standard” (Bizzell 25).

Plato, and our love affair with him, emphasizes our desire for one right answer. Through Plato, we have developed an educational desire for convergent thought. Yet, one byproduct of convergent thinking is “annihilation” of dissonant ideas, thoughts, methods, and ways of learning. The Sophists, instead, valued diversity of expression and that expression was possible through education for “all comers” (Bizzell 25). Can we connect the Platonic quest for absolute answers to current trends in standardized education, which also values convergent thinking despite an evolving global economy that thrives on divergent thought?

In my composition classes, we are practicing writing and the analysis of argument by reading and listening to a variety of current arguments. On Monday, my students and I found inspiration from a video presentation by Sir Ken Robinson titled, “Changing Education Paradigms” where he talks about how we should change the old model of education that is based on industrial models of production, standardized thinking and anesthetic approaches to learning. While clearly Isocrates and Plato lived long before the industrial revolution, I could not help but think about them within the context of Sir Robinson’s presentation. The industrial model of education, which we continue to cling to with Bush’s No Child Left Behind and Obama’s Race to the Top, values one right answer and one path to truth and knowledge. Our current education system seeks to unify and standardize knowledge. And, this all sounds like Plato. The industrial model of education goes further, translating its quest for absolute-ness into terms of productivity. As David Russell writes, we measure educational success by “the number of errors reduced per dollar invested, and students [can be] tracked and taught according to their deficiencies” (154). Furthermore, our industrialized education system thrives on  what Paolo Freire’s has defined as the “banker model of education,” where the “right” knowledge is deposited by teachers into students.

More pointedly, this Isocrates-Plato distinction also relates to the “invention tension” that faces composition classrooms. Composition classrooms have an obligation to teach students academic forms, methods and vocabulary. Composition instructors must guide students as they “invent the university,” as Bartholomae describes this process of academic assimilation. As we, composition instructors, help our students assimilate, we are placing them on the path to knowledge, much like Plato. This invention and assimilation is very much steeped in right-way formulas and convergent thought. Yet, I believe, our job is also to encourage divergent thinking and diverse modes of expression, much like the Sophists. We must navigate the tension between helping students “invent the university,” while also enabling them the freedom of invention in writing and identity.

Beyond that, Isocrates advocated for education that prepared students to rhetorically tangle with current affairs. Composition teachers have a duty to acknowledge the ancient Greek roots of rhetoric, but like Isocrates, we must juxtapose it within a relevant, real-world realm.
When we think about the Sophists like this, should we rescue them from their reputation as subtle and manipulative tricksters?

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Bizzell, Patricia and Bruce Herzberg, ed. The Rhetorical Tradition: Readings from Classical Times to the Present. Second Edition. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s. 2001.

Russell, David. R. “American Origins of the Writing-across-the-Curriculum Movement (1992).” The Norton Book of Composition Studies. Ed. Susan Miller. New York: W.W. Norton & Company, Inc., 2009. 151-170.